Tuesday, August 30, 2011

GWE: Day 2

1. Describe the study that was carried out in the article.
   The study that was carried out was by Nature Magazine to test the accountability of Wikipedia, an online search engine, by comparing some of it's articles to the Encyclopedia Britannica.  
2. What were the results?
   They found that both sites had errors, Wikipedia with slightly more, but that they were generally reliable.
3. Why do you think there is so much controversy surrounding Wikipedia if "official" sources like Encyclopedia Britannica have similar problems with accuracy?
   People can change something in an instant and someone may not notice the change right away.  During the time between corrections someone may find the wrong information and believe it to be true.  Wikipedia does have accurate information, but with open editing someone will eventually end up with wrong information.
4. Check on your Wikipedia edit (or make your Wikipedia edit if you already haven't). Has it been fixed yet?
   On Wikipedia, I changed the life span of a great white shark from 30 years to 5 years. The change was fixed in the course of 8 hours.

Thursday, August 25, 2011

History of English :)


1.     1.)   The English language was influenced by the Jutes, the Saxons, and the Angles.  This language has its origins in about the fifth century A.D, when these tribes from the continent invaded what we now know as England.  http://www.answers.com/topic/english-language
2.    2.)    English is in the Indo-European family of languages.  Modern English is related to Latin and the modern romance languages, the Germanic languages (English, German, Swedish, etc.), the Indo-Iranian languages, the Slavic languages, the Baltic languages, the Celtic languages, and Greek.  Modern English is mostly related to other Germanic languages such as German and Swedish. http://www.anglik.net/englishlanguagehistory.htm
3.     3.)   The Norman Invasion of 1066 was a major influence of the English language.    The conquest created a link between the island of Great Britain with the European continent through the connection of England and French Normandy.  This connection played an important role in the development of the English language. http://www.historyguy.com/norman_conquest_england.html
4.     4.)   William Langland’s Piers Plowman is considered one of the greatest early works of English literature.   Chaucer’s Canterbury Tales is also considered an early best of English literature.  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_literature#Old_English
5.     5.)   The invention, or innovation, of the printing press helped spread the English language as well as other European languages. http://www.ideafinder.com/history/inventions/printpress.htm
6.     6.)   English is the closest language to being a common, world language because it’s reach is far greater than any other languages, and is the most spoken language.  The American economic and cultural supremacy has been the driving force behind the English language.  American dominance and influence has also made it a very important and used language.  http://www.thehistoryofenglish.com/issues_global.htm
      7.)   I don't think the English language will be common in 50 years because more and more people are learning all kinds of different languages. Most people are required to know at least another foreign language if they want to go to college. Also most jobs like it if their employees can speak multiple languages. It helps them out with their costumers.


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Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Revised Editorial :)

 I read an article called, "As Ocean Pollution Mounts, "Toxic Slime" Rises Up, Destroying Ocean Life." This article talked about how humans have polluted the ocean so badly that a new form of bacteria has started to form killing off our coral reefs and food supply. Scientist say as this continues, almost all of our food sources will be gone and we will be forced to live off of jellyfish, sea urchins, and squid. Everyone knows that this is happening, but no one has done anything to take care of the problem.
   One reason why humans shouldn't pollute our oceans is because they are our main food source. I mean a lot of the things we eat today mainly come from the sea. Mostly everyone in the world has eaten some sort of seafood. Fish and other kinds of ocean animals are sold on black markets around the world by people in third world countries. If humans keep polluting our oceans, the fish will die off and millions of people around the world won't have this food source.  Also, since we pollute the water, which is the marine life's air supply, we are basically letting them breathe in all the harmful chemicals we put in the water. Once they inhale all these chemicals, it gets in their bodies and stays there. So when fisherman catch them for us to eat, we are actually eating the harmful chemicals we put in the ocean. It's kind of like what goes around, comes around.
   Another reason why humans should stop polluting our oceans is because it causes a lot of marine life to die off. Every animal in the water plays a huge role in the cycle of the ocean's ecosystem, without certain animals, the balance of the ocean would be off. Some animals have been here for many, many years and we're killing them off. Soon, some of these marine animals could be endangered and become extinct. This could lead to a dramatic change in the oceans ecosystem and the food change will start to change as well. So to prevent our animals from dying, we need find a new way to dispose of our waste.
   The third reason why humans should stop polluting our oceans is because we will need it for our future water supply. There is only 3 percent of fresh water in the world, and soon or later we will run out of it. Our best bet is to try and keep the water clean. It will benefit us in the long run because if the water is clean, the fish will be healthier. We could eat them without having problems about them being poisonous,  and we could have more water to be purified.
   As you can see, there are so many reasons why we humans should stop polluting our oceans. We need to stop because the ocean is one of our main food supplies, it kills off marine life, and it will be our future water source. The ocean needs our help, will you be the one to make this change?

Analyze YOUR Editorial

1. What is the author's claim?
   The author's claim was that humans are polluting our oceans which is causing all this "toxic slime". Scientists say that the "toxic slime" is not allowing the sunlight to be able to shine to the reefs. This is killing our reefs which are 25% of the oceans. They also are life of the ecosystems. The author thinks we should stop polluting the ocean.

2. Did the author offer adequate support for his or her claim? EXPLAIN.
   Yes, the author offers adequate support for his/her claim. It states that the "toxic slime" is killing off food sources for certain animals. Some of which are big in the fishing industry. So far, fisherman have been catching lots of jellyfish, sea urchins, and other small sea life that humans really won't buy to sell and eat. The biggest fish that are essential to the fishing industry is crab, lobster, and other small fish. The thing is the "toxic slime" is a big factor for their decreasing size in population.  

3. After reading the article, decide if you agree or disagree with the author. EXPLAIN your reasoning.
   I agree with the author's claim because we do need to keep our oceans clean. I mean they are a giant food source for us. A lot of the food we eat today comes from the sea. Also the oceans regulate the earth's temperature. Polluting it with chemicals and our feces might change the whole structure of how it works. The marine life is also a key factor to how the ecosystem progresses through life. Every animal and every spec of algae contributes to how everything runs. When we start polluting, it changes the structure. So keeping them clean is a good thing to do.

4. Cite (put in quotation marks) a part of the article that clearly defines it as an editorial instead of an article. If you do not understand the difference, review the editorial link in a previous post.
   University of British Columbia fisheries Scientist Daniel Pauly fears that one day "My kids will tell their children: Eat your jellyfish."

5. Find another article THAT ARGUES THE OPPOSITE SIDE of the same issue. Post the link.

Monday, Part 2

The fairy tale I chose was the one called, "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Andersen.
Here's the link ----> http://www.online-literature.com/hans_christian_andersen/2084/ 

My thematic statement for this story is, "Sometimes things don't always go as planned."

Thursday, August 18, 2011

Sample Editorials :)

A.)"The Clear Case for the Gas Tax"

1.)   The author thinks that when the federal gas tax expires, it will be tremendously destructive to our country. He believes this because it would bankrupt the already stressed Highway Trust Fund, with devastating effects on the country’s highways, bridges, mass transit systems and the economy as a whole.
2.)   Yes, because the author supported their claim by using reports and various facts. They gave many reasons why the tax should be kept in place or even be increased.  Throughout the whole article, the author mentions many people’s opinions to support their claim.  This allows him to draw the reader in and hopefully, they will agree with them to be on their side. They also use statistics about the economy and how much people would pay.
3.)    I agree that the gas tax shouldn’t be expired. I think this because without it, the roads of America won’t be good enough to even drive on. If people aren’t willing to pay, then they shouldn’t complaining about how bad our roads are. If we don’t have the funds to fix our roads, the quality of them would be disastrous. The roads and bridges are at constant use in America and we need to keep them in good shape for the future.
4.)   I think this part of the article clearly defines it as an editorial instead of an article, “Unless Congress extends it, the 18.4 cents-a-gallon federal gas tax will expire on Sept. 30. Allowing that to happen would be tremendously destructive.”
5.)   I honestly couldn’t find other articles that argued the opposite side of the issue. I did find a lot of other articles that showed more people who agreed with the issue this author stated.

 B.) "Ethics, Politics, and the New York Times"

1.)   The author that wrote this article believes that the New York Times is claiming to be worried about the Court’s legitimacy, but is actually attacking the conservative justice, eventually revealing the magazine’s “highly partisan agenda”.
 2.)   The author supports his claim by breaking down the editorial. He explains his claim, points out NYT’s lies, and shows how the newspaper chooses specific decisions that support their claim.  He explains each of these in the editorial and had support from the New York Times.  Throughout the editorial, the writer had a lot of support to back up his claim.
3.)   I disagree with the author’s claim because everyone in the world is going to have an opinion. People were made to express what they think and feel. That is why we have such a diverse world. So many people’s opinions influence how the world turns out to be. You can’t stop people from saying what they feel, that is why we have freedom of speech.
4.)   When I first started to read this editorial, I started to realize that the first couple of sentences were quite aggressive. “I’ve had ample occasion to expose the mendacityinanity, and confusion that have pervaded recent New York Times house editorials on the Supreme Court and ethics, and I’ll confess that it’s rather tedious to do so yet again, but I gather that there are some people who still take NYT house editorials seriously, so here goes”.
5.)   I honestly couldn’t find a site that argues the opposite side of the same issue. I think many people in America just don’t really pay attention to these problems.

C.) “A Race to Repudiate Government”

1.)   I think the author’s claim is kind of hard to identify, but he is saying that Rep. Michelle Bachmann, Ron Paul, Texas Gov. Rick Perry are the best candidates in the upcoming Presidential election, Paul and Bachmann being the top two.  The author also says that Rep. Tim Pawlenty was not strong enough to continue in the race. So he isn’t there anymore.
2.)   The author supports his claim by describing each candidate using strong words.  He brings out points in past debates and he also describes why each of them are in the top ranking of the elections. In all, the support wasn’t that great because the author jumps around too much. You can’t keep track of what his point really is.
3.)   I honestly disagree with the author’s claim because he hasn’t given me enough information about each candidate. I feel as if even if they got the popular vote in the elections, it doesn’t mean they were the best for the job.
4.)   “Why not let a handful of conservatives and libertarians winnow the field? It will toughen up the candidates for the extremist gauntlet to come.”  This statement leads me to believe the article is in fact an editorial.
5.)   http://www.nytimes.com/2011/08/18/opinion/bruni-heroes-until-theyve-arrived.html?scp=2&sq=editorials%20against%20bachmann&st=cse 

D.) “An Industry in Need of Accountability"

1.)   The author’s claim is that he thinks the industry is acting on bad conduct. He is glad that the government is taking a stand against the companies because others aren’t. The writer thinks that the industry needs some instruction.
 2.)   The author supports his claim by adding statistics and quotes in his editorial.  He explains how many people have sued the company for fraud; furthermore, he goes on to show why and how the company can be sued.
3.)   I agree with the author because that money was supposed to be used for education, not just for the company. If the company’s aren’t regulated, they’re going to keep taking money from the government. This will hurt the economy in the long run.
4.)   “The suit against the Education Management Corporation, … the government is at last prepared to move decisively against the unscrupulous conduct that appears to be all too common in the industry.” This makes me feel like this article is an editorial.

E.) "S&P downgrade is about politics, not U.S. debt"

1.)   The author claims the extremists aren't allowing the government to use funds for other needed causes, and that they should be ignored.   The government should take control over economic policy.
2.)   The writer does support their claim in the article. They explain how the extremists are in the way of the government by spending their money. The extremists don’t want to spend money on education nor energy.
3.)   To be honest, I could care less about these extremists. I mean there are bigger issues out there than dealing with people like them. If the government wasn’t so concerned about what the extremists were going to do next, the money would be put to use somewhere more effectively.
4.)   "Leaders who acknowledge facts and can face down extremists must retake control of economic policy.  If they don't, the future is truly bleak.” This statement is what makes me believe this is an editorial.